Task 2:Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of old houses in local areas. Others think that people should have the freedom to build houses of their own style. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that new homes should be designed in the style of old houses in the local areas, as opposed to being able to freely build houses in their own style. In my opinion, I believe that building houses like other local houses will bring more benefits to the people living there.
On the one hand, the houses with different designs from other houses in the same residential area will make the whole area more joyful and artistic. The houses built by owners not only give the residential area a new look but also show the owner's personality. For example, owners can paint the walls of their building whatever they like their colour, wallpaper or art, not only that they can show their neighbours their personality. them and easily make friends with the people who live there and make their home the most unique and beautiful home.
On the other hand, the community-like home design in that area could protect the owners from thieves and dangers. When the houses look alike will raise a sense of community, there is no distinction between rich and poor when they live in the same house type when viewed from the outside. Moreover, people living here do not have to worry about crime, because thieves cannot distinguish which house is rich to rob, so people can safely live without having to think about the crime that will come to them.
In conclusion, although many people want to design a home to express their personality, I strongly believe that building a house like any other in the neighbourhood will bring more benefits. for the homeowner.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'owners'' or 'owner's'?
Suggestion: owners'; owner's
...ntial area a new look but also show the owners personality. For example, owners can pa...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 433, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Them
...how their neighbours their personality. them and easily make friends with the people...
^^^^
Line 2, column 433, Rule ID: SENT_START_THEM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...how their neighbours their personality. them and easily make friends with the people...
^^^^
Line 2, column 517, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
... who live there and make their home the most unique and beautiful home. On the other hand,...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...neighbourhood will bring more benefits. for the homeowner.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78966789668 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31981558943 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520295202952 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9425214911 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368851785959 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136816788114 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108331173632 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232776218412 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122745117034 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'owners'' or 'owner's'?
Suggestion: owners'; owner's
...ntial area a new look but also show the owners personality. For example, owners can pa...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 433, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Them
...how their neighbours their personality. them and easily make friends with the people...
^^^^
Line 2, column 433, Rule ID: SENT_START_THEM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
...how their neighbours their personality. them and easily make friends with the people...
^^^^
Line 2, column 517, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
... who live there and make their home the most unique and beautiful home. On the other hand,...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...neighbourhood will bring more benefits. for the homeowner.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78966789668 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31981558943 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520295202952 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9425214911 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368851785959 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136816788114 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108331173632 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232776218412 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122745117034 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.