"Telecommuting" refers to workers doing their jobs from home for part of each week and communicating with their office using computer technology. Telecommuting is growing in many countries and is expected to be common for most office workers in

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"Telecommuting" refers to workers doing their jobs from home for part of each week and communicating with their office using computer technology. Telecommuting is growing in many countries and is expected to be common for most office workers in the coming decades.

What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Telecommuting has been rapidly increasing across many countries, providing opportunities to employees and employers to connect and work remotely. It is asserted that in future, this trend would be widely accepted by most of the organizations. However, this drift has both pros and cons, which are discussed in subsequent paragraphs.

To begin with the merits, the first and foremost significant benefit of work from home is that it provides flexibility to employees. In fact, a sense of freedom increases the happiness index of workers. As a result, professionals would become more productive as well as they get plenty of time to spend with their family members. Another prominent advantage is, companies can save a lot of money. In other words, companies have to spend huge amount of financial funds to facilitate comfortable environment in office, and, if people can work from home than it will cut organizations expenditures on electricity bills, internet bills and many other amenities. To illustrate an example, a renowned multinational company named IBM closed their 17 offices in US and provided their workers work from home, and it was a huge saving of money. Furthermore, this transformation also gives opportunity to individuals to save more time, as everyday a lot of commuting is involved to be present in office. Hence, they can utilize this time to be more efficient and effective in their professional and personal work, which further enhance work life balance.

On the flip side, there are a few demerits of this transformation. Teleworking may have some negative impacts on team work. As a matter of fact, communication between team members is less effective when people work distantly from distributed places as compared to working under same roof. Consequently, it not only becomes hard for team members to solve problems which require more collaboration but also lead to poor professional relationships. Besides this, working from home can be distractive, especially for parents having young children. For instance, kids may not able to distinguish between office and off hours of their parents and keep on disturbing them, which can be annoying experience for workers. Thus, such situations may have devastating impacts on a professional`s own career.

To conclude, despite the advantages of saving time, money and ease to work that telecommunication can offer, the disadvantages of poor team work and disturbance at home should also be taken into consideration.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34263959391 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21268169323 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596446700508 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8926158255 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.789473684 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7368421053 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1578947368 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168466507569 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484033924694 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522471574494 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895298829079 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422570991004 0.056905535591 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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