The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashions in clothes and other consumer’s goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today’s world, many people opine that an individual tendency to copy each other is easily depicted from the increase in demand and consumption of fashionable clothes and electronic items and to which I agree. This I shall prove with the arguments in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, globalization is the primary factor behind the booming fashion industry. This is because irrespective of the age group and gender people opine that to create an influential impact on a society they have to wear attire in resemblance to the celebrities. For instance, a few decades back people could be observed wearing traditional dresses either in or outside their home, however, with the advent of networking technology people are exposed to multi-national brands and international models who have eye-catching beauty and figure which looks attractive in those branded clothes. Therefore, people copy them to beautify themselves.
Furthermore, there is no doubt that every day the new machine is invented, which primarily focuses on capturing the market by promoting their new advanced features. Hence, when a user sees a product, for example, a newly launched phone being promoted by a famous personality they want to buy it irrespective of the price. The well-known case was the launch of the I Phone X where people started forming a queue before the dawn time, though there was a minor modification than the previous one. However, as this brand is generally famous among the high-class people, some individuals from middle or lower also buy it to show their false status in the community. As a consequence, most people end-up as copycats.
To conclude, the above analysis proves that in the contemporary world people are much into showing their status and beautifying themselves and therefore, use of high-end clothes and goods are the ways to create that impact.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'I'?
Suggestion: the; I
.... The well-known case was the launch of the I Phone X where people started forming a ...
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Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...before the dawn time, though there was a minor modification than the previous one...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23178807947 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91777287244 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629139072848 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.3192806544 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.666666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.092427626766 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314057344028 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421923758117 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602866885274 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04406533112 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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