There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music?
Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Arts play an important role when it comes to cultural identity. Music is an effective element for relaxation, and it may help to solve some health issues. Whilst some people are of the belief that Folklore is more important than foreign music, others have a diverse view. I am of the opinion that local music is important rather than an international one. This essay will first look at the need for music in people's lives, and then will discuss the importance of traditional music for nation’s identity before reaching a conclusion.
To begin with, Arts such as Music can play an indispensable role for human beings and non-human. In other words, Music has an effective role when it comes to treatments and medical aspects, Not only does it help males and females to feel calm, but also doctors use it to assist patients to face some illness. For example, if I feel stressed after a busy day work, I will listen to songs which aid me to release pressure and give me inside peace. Moreover, some farmers are using some kinds of music at their livestock in order to make animals more relax which help animals to produce milk more than before. For instance, in 2017, an article has been published by the Economist showed that some cows produce milk more when it listing to music. Hence, music has a significant impact on people's life.
In addition to that, people should listen to traditional music; it is an integral part of customs and traditions. As an illustration, the widespread of foreign music at any nations will slowly kill its values and replace it by different one; some people will suffer from culture conflict. Egypt is an example of a country which suffers from culture conflict because of the spreading of American songs. Thus, having given this example authorities should impose laws to limit the spread of foreign songs in order to tackle this issue.
It can be concluded that music is important for people in many life's aspects; I would like to restate my opinion that traditional music is more important for countries rather than an international one in order to save its national identity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81095890411 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52772355617 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542465753425 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9333540206 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285961060473 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112473227349 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755088121032 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207267901347 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711919785517 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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