You saw an advert asking for volunteers to run a charity event:
1. Explain why you are interested in helping
2. give details suitable past experience
3. suggest ways you might help with the event
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to you regarding an announcement I saw it yesterday in a newspaper, and I would like to participate in this charity campaign.
Firstly, I want to introduce myself. I am Ahmed Karem. I am 38 years old, and I am working as a production manager at a steel factory. When I read the Advertise asking for people to work as volunteers, I was happy; I like such this work, and I believe it is an important job.
Secondly, I have a good experience in work as a volunteer; I work 2 years on an awareness campaign in my Hometown, and I have the knowledge which makes me able to work at any charity events.
Finally, because I am a good speaker, I can make meetings to explain our vision and mission; Moreover, I can deal with a Photoshop application, so I can make a design for this event. In addition, I can work in Word and Excel applications.
I look forward to hearing from you; should you require any further information, you will call me. You can contact me via WhatsApp, and here it is my contact number: 5577689. Thank you in advance.
Faithfully,
Ahmed
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...manager at a steel factory. When I read the Advertise asking for people to work as volunteers...
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..., and I believe it is an important job. Secondly, I have a good experience in wo...
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...an work in Word and Excel applications. I look forward to hearing from you; shou...
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...9. Thank you in advance. Faithfully, Ahmed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48258706468 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88926680607 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587064676617 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3106842239 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9090909091 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190737432265 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632976548949 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675069769633 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101964643332 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066842488839 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.