There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?
In the 21st century, technology has rapidly advanced and served in many fields and one of them is mobile phones. Smartphones have changed the way of communication between people in a positive manner. However, cellphones cause few troubles linked to the health, social life of individuals and technical problems too. I would discuss about the concerns and whether it outweighs the disadvantages or not in this essay.
The use of smartphones has increased rapidly that has a negative effect on people’s lives in social, medical and technical manner. People prefer to play games on phones, instead of participating in outdoor activities and they tend to use their phones for many hours a day that impacts their health. In addition, they talk to others through chat and internet calls on their cellphones that is making them diffident in interacting with individuals face-to-face. Moreover, people keep their important and private files in phones that could be a risk because technology is not absolutely secured, therefore, phones can be hacked. For example, ISIS, an Islamic terrorism group, hacks profiles of citizens of a country to know about different places that helps them in planning an attack.
On the other hand, apart from negative impacts of using smartphones, they have many benefits too. Mobile phones have made communication easy, as one can connect with another sitting anywhere in the world. An individual can do video calling to anyone in the world, which feels like talking to anyone in-person. Besides that, one can enjoy internet surfing and can search for any information on such devices. To illustrate, parents use mobile phones to interact with their children studying in abroad and receive progress report on smartphones with the help of internet.
To conclude, smartphone causes many problems for an individual that needs to handled effectively. Though using such a device creates several difficulties but it does not outweigh the advantages of such a technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive manner" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...the way of communication between people in a positive manner. However, cellphones cause few troubles...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2893081761 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82557275572 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0398711659 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239252511477 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682179511914 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493353196817 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127564284652 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390064594776 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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