Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth rather than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people.
To What extent do you agree or disagree?
In the present time, superstars are much popular due to their looks and affluent lifestyle instead of their accomplishments that is opined to have a negative influence on adolescents. I do not concur with the given assertion. This essay shall delineate key benefits such as healthy life and determination towards goals which would help them to be successful in their career.
To begin with, glamour is the outcome of better health care which everyone should follow. Young generation can learn and adapt this quality in their life with a mindset of looking better. Therefore, they would become fitness freak and would eat less junk foods that is considered a major challenge currently. For instance, teenagers go to gym and follow a proper diet to maintain an active lifestyle. This would not only result in a fit body, but also help in beautiful appearance.
Furthermore, luxurious livelihood could foster young people to strive hard for their career goals. Beautiful mansions, supercars are the dreams of many individuals that attract them in an alluring manner; therefore, seeing such wealth could ignite a spark in children to work hard and achieve success. To illustrate, young generation gets inspired by celebrities' fancy lifestyle and wish to live in the same surrounding, for which they set an aim on how to earn such a livelihood. Eventually, this approach could help them to focus on their life and live the preferred life.
To conclude, achievements of famous personalities should not be ignored as it is the result of their struggle. Nevertheless, delightful and wealthy lifestyle could also encourage teenagers to strive the similar life or even better than that.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an alluring manner" with adverb for "alluring"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17582417582 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84987805616 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4226969711 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.928571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226662374186 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728690926196 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494044931353 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127244743881 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353282466463 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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