there is too much stress in the workplace what can employees and employers do

Essay topics:

there is too much stress in the workplace. what can employees and employers do?

In this technological world, the life of folks become more and more stressful as compare to before. Now a days, people suffer high level of difficulties at their works place, which negatively impact on their daily life style. In the upcoming paragraphs, i would like to discuss the reason of theirs stressful life at workplace and also would like to introduce solution for this issue.
To begin with, first and foremost reason of getting stress at workplace is high level of competition among the employers create the high level of work load which directly disturb their mental and physical health. To elaborate this, most of the time they feel frustrating towards the behavior done by other employers, this creates disturbance at the working place. Secondly, in order to get lot of work pressure which is given by the employee to the employer create challenging because of the high level of work stress and the given deadline.
One of the biggest reasons is lack of job security of the employees, to elaborate it , employers have big threat of loosing their job or getting less hours or less pay rate. because of this reason they can not able to concentrate on the work and this directly create work stress. Last but not least, employees have job stress due to high level of work pressure and responsibility of employers work. for instance, if anything happen wrong in the organisation then it is all because of the employee's lack of responsibility.
in order to reduce work stress, both can do some changes, employers should not need to do work in their break time and should spend that time with the cup of coffee and also listen some music in order to feel rejuvenating and rejoinful. they also deserve vacations in order to freshen their mental health that can directly reduce the work load. Employees on the other hand should provides employers a job security options in order to make them comfortable and satisfied towards their job status.
to sum up, stress at the workplace is an issue of great concern. and both needs to take some steps to reduce this in the betterment of workplace.

Votes
Average: 4.9 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...nd more stressful as compare to before. Now a days, people suffer high level of difficulti...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ore stressful as compare to before. Now a days, people suffer high level of difficulti...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...life style. In the upcoming paragraphs, i would like to discuss the reason of the...
^
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...curity of the employees, to elaborate it , employers have big threat of loosing th...
^^
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
... threat of loosing their job or getting less hours or less pay rate. because of this reaso...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... threat of loosing their job or getting less hours or less pay rate. because of this...
^^^^
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...or getting less hours or less pay rate. because of this reason they can not able to con...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...e and responsibility of employers work. for instance, if anything happen wrong in t...
^^^
Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is all because of the employees lack of responsibility. in order to reduce work...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...the employees lack of responsibility. in order to reduce work stress, both can d...
^^
Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...der to feel rejuvenating and rejoinful. they also deserve vacations in order to fres...
^^^^
Line 4, column 380, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...oad. Employees on the other hand should provides employers a job security options in ord...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...d satisfied towards their job status. to sum up, stress at the workplace is an i...
^^
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...workplace is an issue of great concern. and both needs to take some steps to reduce...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81163434903 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59028982071 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484764542936 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9824120966 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194329472764 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717941727441 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495835016794 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112302498619 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033991321912 0.056905535591 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.