Since the bygone era, children are considered to be the image of God due to their incorruptible conscience and innocence of minds. Nowadays, innumerable adolescents spend ample time enjoying computer games. Numerous people comprehend it as an advantageous aspect while many intellectual individuals consider it injurious for children. According to my perception, it impacts students health as well as mental capabilities.
Commencing the discussion, rampant utilisation of computers can adversely affect their health. This can be considered from two different perspectives. Firstly, spending excessive time playing computer games impacts their behaviour. Besides, children become arrogant, stubborn and maladjusted. Secondly, children who play games on computer deliberately neglect their studies. Consequently, they suffer degradation in academics and get demoralised. Apart from this, children perform less physical activities and become lethargic. Also, various pupils suffer obesity due to their flibbertigibbet nature.
Further reinforcing my thoughts, playing computer games perpetually can cause catastrophic intellectual as well as mental disorders. For instance, nowday numerous children feel pleasant while playing computer games but instantly become angry and irritated if asked for studies. Moreover, children suffer such behavioural changes because they least bother to spend quality time with grandparents. Hence,they become unable to comprehend the importance of family values. Apart from this, they ultimately lose the competitive spirit due to lack of confidence and motivation.
To recapitulate, in essence, children are the image of the Creator. They may face serious repercussions due to the rampant usage of computers. Ample time spent with computer games will definitely impact their innovative minds. Ultimately, they may suffer from behavioral problems and become lethargic and maladjusted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Further,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.24812030075 5.12529762239 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12556852198 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612781954887 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9427462315 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.1428571429 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212751650212 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643377622839 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610633386611 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134879523701 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440960316275 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.08 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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