Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which the way sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advertising and people's real need are two marketing terms that are often used interchangeably by marketers. While consumer's basic needs are considered as the main selling factor, I think advertising plays a more important role in a high sale promotion of well-liked products.
On the one hand, people who live in this modern world are more conscious. Their needs and desires change as technology develops. The society also knows what people need and try to meet the consumer's high demand for goods, which lead to a growth of product's sales. In this case, advertisement plays an informative role in increasing people's awareness to make the right choices not making sale promotion.
On the other hand, advertising is a key part of modern business. It is a form of communication intended to persuade people to take some action. Companies tell consumers about their new products, services and benefits of specific products via advertising and try to manipulate people. They know the fact that people enjoy adverts so they use media, magazines, Newspapers and TV commercials to show their brands to consumers multiple times and encourage them that buying a product will make them happier. Consequently, when people see it out there, they are likely to buy those products, which plays a direct role in sale enhancement.
In conclusion, although consumer's real needs have an impact on sale promotion in some way, I think advertisement effects on selling popular consumer goods is much more significant.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, well, while, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17695473251 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90873443252 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609053497942 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1913863903 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222149268328 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079031501976 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726136976358 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15812376408 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644871616149 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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