Today many doctors say that people are not getting enough time for physical exercise.
What are the causes? What can be done?
It is irrefutable that exercise is necessary for humans to have a disease-free and healthy life. It is argued by many doctors that individuals are not receiving sufficient time to do the physical workout. This essay will discuss the reasons behind such behaviour and the possible solution in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, people are more motivated and interested in their aims to become rich and acquire fame; therefore, individuals spend most of their daily routine in work life. In other words, the hectic schedule of work spares no time for physical activities. In this competitive world, success in terms of money is more important as compared with a healthy lifestyle, hence people consume little time to exercise. Similarly, the lack of discipline in daily routine is another reason, where the younger generation gives the least importance to physical exercise, as they find these activities are time consuming and boring.
Education on importance of exercise to society is the essential step to increase the physical activity time in daily schedule. Awareness camps on value of exercise on daily basis by experts can play vital role in guiding people right way of living. Similarly, State should take some strong steps in guiding people the value of exercise in maintaining good health. For instance, in India, the government has passed the law that every workplace, school and college must give 1 hour to their employees and students for physical exercise like lunch time from their schedule time. This will not only motivate people to do exercise, but also persuade them to take part in order to improve health level of society.
To conclude, the burden of work schedule and lack of motivations are the reasons behind such failure in keeping time to perform daily exercises by individuals. However, educating people the value of exercise in their life is essential and government support can play an essential role in it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6651606641 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553459119497 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4942172412 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.357142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18455245435 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679451478418 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436884019067 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112698222694 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310639175422 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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