In this competitive world, university offers courses and activities that help students to gain knowledge and prepare them for a career. Some feel that it is equally important to take part in other activities. I believe that students should acquire overall development. This essay will discuss importance of activities and how taking part in different activities is beneficial to the students.
To begin with, a student who limits himself only to academics will be the odd ones out in society at a later point in time. Therefore, it become a crucial that university should concentrate not only on meeting industry demands but also on helping students be involved in other activities. Moreover, One has to devote time to developing other talents as well. As everyone is born with capabilities, so pursuing different areas such as singing, dancing, sports, debating and so on help to find out hidden talents. Furthermore, it is tough to predict the future. Hence, there is no need to confine oneself solely to studies. May be activities on which they involve in their tertiary education, would have helped them in some manner in future.
Moving further, There are many other facets of university life which one has to sense and appreciate. In other words, student taking part in inter college events like a group discussion will gain knowledge, build communication abilities and win more contacts which may help him in becoming successful in an interview and career as well. Besides this, Devoting time to other activities will not only bring holistic development but also provide a chance to opt as a career. To illustrate, there are innumerous examples of engineering students pursuing careers as a singer, actor or sportsman.
In conclusion, though it is important to concentrate on studies, but one has not to get trapped in the classroom. When learner should not make study as their primary reason and make time to pursue other talents beyond the curriculum as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81448314052 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570987654321 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2386214641 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4117647059 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 46.0 5.01903807615 917% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273847641706 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798683438242 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525553481998 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159089021563 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465736747879 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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