Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays tourism is on peak and it is surveyed that now jet-setters always try to visit the unique tourist places, where the weather conditions are very unrealistic according to their interest and choices. I will discuss the pros and con’s to choose the destination where weather is not suitable. I will provide some justification and evidence to strengthen my view on this discussion.
On the one hand, with the excess of tourism, numerous common tourist places are polluted with the increasing number of tourists and their garbage. Owing to this, sightseers want to discover such places where they could find peace and nature love. Moreover they can do various adventures activities like hiking, skewing, diving etcetera and they meet with the new species of plants and animals . For instance, Most of the young Indian people visit Triyund, where they meet with their soul instead of the crowd. Definitely it is beneficial for the local state to boost up their income.
On the other hand, sometimes situations became worst at the places where the atmospheric conditions are not up to the mark. Because it is not easy for the rescue teams and medical teams to reach such place very soon, Resulted many tourists lose their life even find out their dead bodies is also a difficult task. Apart from this, majority of people do not do analysis about the animals and species, which are living there. Due to this sometimes a trip becomes a dangerous adventure.
To conclude, a person can visit any place according to his interest, but one should do a prior analysis about the suitable conditions of the place and also one should have proper information about the emergency teams and moreover government should declare some dangerous zone, where the entries of the visitors should be banned.
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, apart from, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02341137124 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53477152159 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6603853813 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.538461538 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232636469366 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715421676552 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592563592176 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130452539027 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272155818036 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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