Travelling has gained a lot of popularity in last few years. It is widely seen that many tourist prefers to visit places like Sahara deserts and Antarctica having extreme weathers. I believe, the positive side to it is such places are not overcrowded, less people travel to such places as such extreme weather do not make an enjoyable experience for most of the people. The downside to this is, it may cost a life, if a person's body cannot resist the weather, there are fair chances of going into temperature shock.
Majority of people who enjoys travelling wants to travel to the places that are less explored. Such less touched spots are those that have really hot or cold temperatures. Usually tourists prefer to go to the place where they can enjoy, and the atmosphere is pleasant. So, one of the main advantage of travelling to such location is its not overcrowded. Also, one can know that how much their body can resist the change in temperature. Apart from that, people are keen to know the kind of lifestyle that people have under such extreme conditions. Researchers can also aim to study peoples behavior and
On the other hand, the negative side to it shall not be ignored. It is really important for a person travelling to a country that have extreme weather to do a proper research and have all the required things for protection. For example, person travelling to Antarctica needs to have all essential body gear that will protect them from frost bite as well as the medicine that help them to function properly at such low temperatures. Failed in doing so may cost them their life, as their body are not used to such low temperature, they might suffer from temperature shock and their holiday can turn into nightmare.
In conclusion, it is really important for a person to gather all the necessary information to survive in extreme temperature, so that they can save themselves from falling sick and ruining their vacation. Other than that its seems really fun to explore such places that are less crowded and that provides a total different experience of a lifestyle and culture at such extremities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun tourist seems to be countable; consider using: 'many tourists'.
Suggestion: many tourists
... last few years. It is widely seen that many tourist prefers to visit places like Sahara des...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... it is such places are not overcrowded, less people travel to such places as such ex...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay cost a life, if a persons body cannot resist the weather, there are fair chanc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, really, so, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80601092896 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63445932676 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513661202186 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2690107258 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.9375 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20348786913 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715263712902 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739973405958 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135637722051 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694159482854 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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