In today’s world with great improvement in technology and economy, we can see more tourists are willing to travel to isolated places. In this essay some advantages and disadvantages of this issue will be discussed.
First, by visiting these places, people will gain a great experience and be more knowledgeable about surrounding environment. Because these places are more unique and isolated tourists who are visiting such places will be more familiar with the mother nature, earth and how valuable this planet would be. Also, due to the fact that most of these places have sever conditions and can be experiencing extremely hot or cold conditions, when people visiting these places they will realize the value of the life they have.
On the other hand, travelling to these unique locations comes with some drawbacks as well. First of all, because these locations are considering as remote locations, allocating a good public health facility like hospital would be a cumbersome task. Therefore, if because of the sever weather conditions tourists especially vulnerable groups for example children and elder people get sick, finding a good health facility would be difficult. Moreover, based on the experience when humankind visiting the remote places, they somehow change the ecosystem of that location to be more desirable for them. And by doing that, they will endanger some of the living species of that place. For example, throughout the history there are some facts that mankind is one of the reasons of the extinctions of some animals including but not limited to mammals like mammoths.
In conclusion, I would see that why some people are willing to travel to unique places, but it seems to me that, there are more disadvantages than the benefits by going to those locations more frequently.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'locations'' or 'location's'?
Suggestion: locations'; location's
... other hand, travelling to these unique locations comes with some drawbacks as well. Firs...
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Line 5, column 638, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
.... And by doing that, they will endanger some of the living species of that place. For examp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18771331058 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7243619786 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539249146758 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0378698677 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260977344059 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936513416553 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843058356931 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155790573888 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684010336785 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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