Tobacco is an addictive substance, but people have been using it freely. Some people say tobacco products (such as cigarettes and smoking pipes) should be made illegal.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People are calling into question the consumption of tobacco products legally. While some advocate the idea that these products should be announced as illegal products, others dismiss them as they state that it does not solve the issue. Admittedly, I am of the opinion that the declaration of tobacco products as illegal products would not solve the issue for a number of compelling reasons.
The most rational justification is that the smugglers are likely to gain more money by putting tobacco items on the list of illegal items. That is if the government were to announce the tobacco products illegal, the benefits accruing from this action would be towards smugglers. In other words, being addictive to these products, some individuals will try to find it for any cost. Therefore, by following this action, not only are we not solving the problem, but also help the mafia bands gathering more money. The perennial problem takes its toll on people who used these products as they are likely to spend more money on their normal consumption.
Yet another compelling reason is that there are no alternative products available. To put it differently, were we to declare banning tobacco products, no other alternative products would be available for the public to use. Thus, for those individuals who are addicted to cigarettes, there is no choice other than purchase alternatives and much more severe drugs from the black market. That is to say, if we made a product illegal, at least one alternative should be legal so the consumers can use that alternative.
To sum up, by put a red flag on tobacco products and ban them, the problem of using them are not likely to be solved. Therefore, I strongly disagree with the declaration of tobacco products as illegal items as it is bound to have serious repercussions on society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, at least, in other words, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96091205212 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72784140643 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537459283388 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.2020407337 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.785714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250844150002 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940048396134 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532882142024 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161765577069 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174726031494 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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