Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert and the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
As the world is becoming flat and ease of connectivity is enhancing experience of budding tourists who do not shy away from exploring the extremes of earth’s biosphere. In my view, by visiting different troposphere specially with high and low temperature zones poses some risks as well as great opportunity to experience life in an exciting manner. This essay will discuss both perspectives of visiting such harsh places.
Firstly, anyone who is willing to reach out to such challenging environment, having extreme cold and hot weather must be possessing strong will power. This can help individual to cope up with any fierce situation in life. Additionally, exploring the unseen boundaries and walking the untread path will enhance one’s confidence. Any enthusiastic tourist will create memories for lifetime by viewing breathtaking views and mesmerizing beauty. The adrenaline to explore can teach life skills from many species who exist in such environment. To cite an example, famous show man vs. wild on discovery channel broadcasts how to survive in extreme situations that can be a life saving skill.
On the other hand, venturing into the unfamiliar terrain can be life threatening for some. No clear pathway, fear of wilderness can take a toll on some. There could be limited access to food, water and shelter that can lead to body fatigue and other health risks. As many people cannot anticipate the life conditions, there may be language and cultural barriers. In adverse circumstances, there may be limited or no access to first aid and medical treatment. For example, as per a recent survey by Travel Guru, many tourists could not buy essentials in vast inhabited arizona’s of Madagascar’, so barter of goods was advised.
To conclude, reaching out extreme terrains enhances one’s experience and help out enriching life skills but caution should be maintained to the unseen struggles by being well prepared.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28709677419 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98856822951 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641935483871 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5306041172 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4117647059 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.097769734016 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313492128266 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384935372962 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593100296502 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470221274482 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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