Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
There is an increase in the number of tourists who are visiting places with challenging conditions, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. Some believe this benefits them with endurance and sense of motivational achievement, whereas others face heath issues and trip is expensive.
One must strive further to achieve their goal and this comes from enduring your strengths. Being able to survive in the hard conditions for tourists is now becoming popular, keeping this in mind they are growing strong physically and mentally to face those difficulties. For example, a recent article in Times of India wrote about a couple from South India who trained themselves to get fit for climbing the Mount Everest. Although, one would survive the drastic climate and conditions of these places, it brings immense pleasure and feeling of achievement, motivating them to take on other challenges in their life. For instance, a study from Harvard suggest that 75% of people who had achieved difficult goals in their life are morally boosted to take on further more challenges. However, these contribute to benefit for the tourist to endure their strength and bring sense of achievement to themselves.
Although there are benefits, there are two main disadvantages to these difficult excursions. Keeping up with your health while travelling is always necessary, especially if you are not familiar with the changing weather, because it may result in severe health issues. People who are not ready for it will face dramatic changes in the climate and can fell ill or suffer injury. There is also heavy cost incurred to these exquisite places than a normal tourist destination. Also the arrangements required would be taken care from person's expense. Like the cost for the gear needed for mountain climbing will be incurred by the person travelling.
Overall, the benefits of endurance and achievement outweighs the disadvantages of health issues and expensive travel.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 473, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...aces than a normal tourist destination. Also the arrangements required would be take...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26751592357 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74639016372 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1616125501 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.266666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239342731266 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743334924535 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858883748831 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133726839724 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663872884856 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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