Your town council has decided to demolish historic building due to lack of funds to renovate. Write a letter to your council man.
In your letter, you should say:
• why it is important to preserve historic building
• how the funds could be generated.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Adam Smith, a local resident in your district. I am writing to let you know about my dissatisfaction about the decision made by council to demolish the historic art museum due to insufficient funds.
Let me explain. It is the only heritage left out in the town and have deep roots in the people's hearts. Also, every year the school students in the town plan their excursion to the museum. Due to all these factors, it must be preserved for our future generations.
We could start collecting a nominal fee from the visitors, which can cover the daily maintenance costs. Although there is budget for its renovation, we can spread out a word in the town to donate money for reestablishing it. I am sure this town will not fall back on its very old heritage.
I hope you take it into consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Adam Smith
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75816993464 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77261342306 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.718954248366 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6975786758 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1818181818 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160436538247 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507487848861 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454142035176 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766902757983 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590094532139 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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