During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurant.
In letter,
-Remind him when and where you met
-tell him what kind of job you are interested in
-say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Ramanath,
This is john miller, earlier from the flight on Sunday evening. I was sitting beside you on the way to Delhi from Mumbai. I am writing with respect to a possible job opportunity at your restaurant.
Let me explain about my place in the current company. I am responsible for managing the overall restaurant services. overall, I am keen on managing the ordeal of your restaurant for customer satisfaction. However, looking for the same around the city.
I have worked with more than three restaurant chains and provided a great service. I was awarded employee of the quarter in my current company. Although I like it here, but would be happy if you could find me suitable for one of your hotels.
I hope to get a prompt reply from you.
Yours faithfully,
john miller
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...naging the overall restaurant services. overall, I am keen on managing the ordeal of yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 675.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 137.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92700729927 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68349203876 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686131386861 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.3885705163 44.8134815571 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.25 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4166666667 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108234311389 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037483195529 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469871682855 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796952966102 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431332872973 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.13 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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