today more people are travelling than ever before.why is this the case? what are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?
Travelling plays a pivotal role in our emotional and physical lives. Many believe that it has a powerful influence on reducing the amount of stress we tolerate daily. On the other hand, some state that it is futile to spend money on travelling.In this essay, I intend to discuss that advantages of travelling outweigh its disadvantages.
It is often suggested that going on a trip is meritorious for two fundamental reasons.For one thing, it provides people with a useful way by which they can enhance their knowledge and information concerning other cultures. For instance, in China, parents send their children to different cities in order to become familiar with various customs and traditions. Another thing is that not only people can get rid of traffic congestion in their own cities for a while but also they can bring more happiness and festivity to their families. As an illustration, imagine a white- collar employee who does overtime, he takes a cost-cutting action and plan a trip for his family.
By contrast, there are several serious disadvantages to taking a trip. In the first place, although we might not like to admit it, travelling is a matter of controversy; it could be harmful for the environment.An example may help clarify the point.Since 2000,travelers have been the most important threat for nature.In the second place, the more people demand to travel the more resorts and luxurious hotels will be built. In other words, pristine lands are filled with buildings to attract more tourists.
By comparing and contrasting the positive and negative side effects of travelling, I personally think that its plus side is considerably more significant than its downside. To support my position, I would like to offer two different but complementary arguments. Firstly, Doctor William Austin, the head of psychology department at Oxford university asserts that it is of great importance to go to a journey at least once a year and cure his patients who suffer from mental disease such as depression, stroke, and so on by suggesting them to go on a trip. The latest figures released by Ministry of Health (MH) revealed that 70 % of teenagers who have overcome the hurdles of illnesses have the real sense of adventure. All in all, travelling opens a new gateway to wonderful horizons.
On the basis of the above, it can be concluded that people are more travelling than ever before because they explored its benefits.However, the question is: Can going on a vacation improve their happiness and health in general? Only time will tell, but in the meantime, it continues to affect every aspect of our daily lives. The hope is that government provides cash welfare services and moral support for its citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, while, another thing, at least, for instance, in general, such as, for one thing, in other words, in the first place, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2292.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 452.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07079646018 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92737705529 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 176.041082164 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595132743363 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.6313480038 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249148947555 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624305304734 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711479071896 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136544474352 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606047571034 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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