Today's world of technology. Life become very hectic because of modern innovation. Compitive era has changed every person life. People busy in their related field to earn more. They want everything for make their life comfortable. Hence they travel alot to achieve their goal in life. It has some pros and cons.
In the past people stay at home. They didn't go anywhere for job and study. Many of them were illiterate. They ate food by own growing like vegetables and crops. There were bargain their commodities. Today student prefer to go where they can attend course of their knowledge. And do jobs in big cities to earn according to his skills and qualification. Some are get a chance to go abroad and settle their life with all advance facilities. They are not uneducated and have knowledge reading every field and about future success.
Some argue that travelling has some week points. Firstly expensive on it is waste of money. Transport vehicle cause of air pollution. Local cities are not developed well because everyone want to go big cities for study and work purpose. Local businesses effect. It is waste of time.sometime dangerous accident occurred while traveling become cause of death.
However it has some negative point but overall traveling is essential for traveler. Otherwise they survive life like past and could not achieve their goal in life. There are public and private vehicle available to travel. Its helpful in economical growth of country. Because every import and export business become easier.government should do some steps to enhance public transport in lower fare. It would be easy for poor to travel in reasonable fare..
All in all,i don't think it has any loss to travel in today's era. Person become more independent instead of past. Traveling is main part of life. It is necessary in compitive world
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence,
...ything for make their life comfortable. Hence they travel alot to achieve their goal ...
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Suggestion:
...bargain their commodities. Today student prefer to go where they can attend cours...
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Suggestion: However,
...le traveling become cause of death. However it has some negative point but overall ...
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Suggestion: Otherwise,
...ll traveling is essential for traveler. Otherwise they survive life like past and could n...
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...cle available to travel. Its helpful in economical growth of country. Because every import...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01302931596 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56862232851 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589576547231 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 16.0721442886 199% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 20.2975951904 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7887756543 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 48.09375 106.682146367 45% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.59375 20.7667163134 46% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.75 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 3.4128256513 469% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205831357358 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532030445827 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680867742078 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132802582165 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600284733598 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.34 50.2224549098 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.3 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 3.0 9.78957915832 31% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.1190380762 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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