Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the past, people used to stay at home or their country house on holidays. Folks enjoyed to spend their leisure time with family and friends staying close to their accommodation. For the last years situation has changed. People tend to take a trip somewhere, predominantly abroad. There are various reasons that caused this situation and following essay will discuss about them.
Contemporary psychologists claim that travelling makes people happy. To be an accurate, ability to travel is essential attribute of successful people. The matter is that we should periodically change our environment and let all our thoughts go. Long time ago I noticed that when I had been staying home for a long time I become more dismal and angry. Everything had changed when I took a trip down to USA. Instantly I thrived, I almost felt like my brain was developing endorphin, that every minute made me happier.
There is no need to travel very far from home. You just need to forged everything bothering you for some period of time. It’s very important to find some entertainment during vacation. For example, visit a concert or football match at any place but your native town will deliver a lot of positive emotions.
However, there are some drawbacks in this case. Firstly, it’s very expansive. Particularly in my country, to go somewhere abroad counts as luxury today, because of low exchange rate of our national currency. Secondly, people who travel a lot are tending to immigrate somewhere. In many cases they become so caught up with new feelings that they forget about native land, native community and finally lose patriotism. It’s important for every country to keep its own nation.
In conclusion I want to say that travelling is a very good hobby. Regardless it’s costly enough, we should find money and time for this. As our health is more expansive than money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoyed spending'.
Suggestion: enjoyed spending
... their country house on holidays. Folks enjoyed to spend their leisure time with family and frie...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...se to their accommodation. For the last years situation has changed. People tend to t...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...orged everything bothering you for some period of time. It's very important to find some ...
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Line 11, column 143, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...we should find money and time for this. As our health is more expansive than money...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in many cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213541666667 0.247107183377 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.169270833333 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0859375 0.0946595960268 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0677083333333 0.0501214627716 135% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0859375 0.0437548338989 196% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.1015625 0.122226691241 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0260416666667 0.0403226058552 65% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70072771882 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0364583333333 0.0326793684256 112% => OK
Particles: 0.00260416666667 0.00163938923432 159% => OK
Determiners: 0.0598958333333 0.0861772015684 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0104166666667 0.021408717616 49% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0104166666667 0.011925033212 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2003.0 1933.35771543 104% => OK
No of words: 330.0 316.048096192 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0696969697 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.372727272727 0.374742101984 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260606060606 0.28420135186 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187878787879 0.203846283523 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142424242424 0.137316102897 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70072771882 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.037074148 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.56093040696 113% => OK
Word variations: 77.2672235785 60.7387585426 127% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0891783567 155% => OK
Sentence length: 13.2 20.7743622355 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8052081452 49.517814964 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.12 127.492653851 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2 20.7743622355 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.44 0.814263465372 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 39.2606060606 49.1944974215 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.0564516129 1.69124875643 62% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195286678353 0.332605444948 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0398411339923 0.102741220458 39% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.04907424216 0.0668466124924 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.41921192039 0.534860350844 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145357781349 0.148594505496 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560990352876 0.134430193775 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462572181347 0.0742795772207 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.157890023357 0.324371583561 49% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0530205513678 0.0638462369009 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968625038293 0.228012699653 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434164633054 0.058150111329 75% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.41683366733 263% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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