Today, people can work and live in anywhere they want, because of the improvement of communication technology and transport.
Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Opinion and discussion essay
With the advent of internet, networking technology and advancements in transportation the life of employees have simplified. I agree that these improvements have enabled employees to work and live in any corner of the world and still remain in employers reach, but there are few drawbacks too. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the arguments and support the former view.
To begin with, there is drastic improvement in communication across the world. This is because, of introduction of free voice calls and video calls by the networks providers. For example, networks like Jio, Airtel are providing free voice calls to any other network, so nor the employees working from home or the employers have to worry about telephone bills. In addition, if an entire team wants to discuss about project kick off and task distribution that practicability could be offered by a software applications, such as skype thus, creating an aura of a meeting room, where direct conversations could be held.
Furthermore, other advancement which has been an asset to modern era is transportation. The reason for this are trams, trains, cars and flights which have reduced the travelling time by exponentional number of hours. For instance, now an employee can virtually attend a morning meeting in Delhi, noon meet Mumbai and meeting over dinner in Calcutta. In addition to this, travelling to a different time zone to monitor work status and return the same day is also possible because of fast travel modes like flights.
Conversely, the major drawback with communication technology is that some employer might call or drop an urgent mail without taking employee leisure time into consideration. Another downside, employees will find it difficult to have a good rapport with each other. This should be manager’s responsibility to overcome these drawbacks.
In conclusion, although employees will face some issues with the advancement in technology as employers might drop the work at any point of the day, I believe that the working at your own schedule will keep employees motivated and satisfied as their work-life balance will be fulfilling.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'want'?
Suggestion: want
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24347826087 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98818790586 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605797101449 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2809405481 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.6 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1419922845 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482220996726 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323551414261 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802478853106 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367871006927 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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