Today tourism is one of the world’s biggest industries and many poorer countries are depending more and more on tourism for their economy.
What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of having a large number of tourists visiting a country?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
many third-world countries around the world have become increasingly dependent on the tourism sector for their economic growth these days. this essay will suggest that the expansion of the tourism sector significantly boosts poor nations’ economy and the major drawback of tourism is that the sleeping cycle of many local residents will be disturbed.
tourism brings a substantial amount of money to less developed countries and helps their economy grow enormously. visitors from developed countries have a tendency to spend a lot of money on souvenirs, valuable items, and sightseeing tickets during their vacations, and thus, local businesses will be able to sell more and turn huge profits. As a result, governments of poor nations can collect more taxes from these local businesses and boost their economy. For example, the government of Cambodia reported that, in 2010, the GDP of this country increased by 8% thanks to the national income from tourism alone.
however, local residents at tourism sites will have to face a huge problem of their sleeping cycle being disturbed by foreign travelers. this is to say, people from other countries are used to going out and drinking at late night and they will not stop until early morning. Therefore, apart from the local sellers who have to stay up to serve their customers, other local citizens will not be able to have a good sleep at night due to the noise made by foreigners. For instance, a survey by the Thanh Nien Newspaper showed that most residents in district 1 of Ho Chi Minh City could not sleep before 2 am because many foreign visitors drank and had very loud conversations before that time.
In conclusion, tourism is indeed a profitable sector which vastly boosts the economy of many poor countries, however, it can also bring disturbance to the local people’s sleep.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, third, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07868852459 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67932452269 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567213114754 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.0794432917 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.818181818 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237475274415 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102726381992 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629175717054 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154643671775 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707181391741 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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