The modern-day consumerism has given rise to a revolution in the way people are buying. With many feasibilities owning a new product has now become much easy. However, the production of various types of goods is also bringing extra burden to the environment. This is because of the ingredients and after-use wastage involved in the process.
To elaborate, humans are in a continuous need of a range of goods each day. These involve food, groceries, clothing, automobiles, electronics, and etcetera. Consequently, thousands of production units, shopping centers, and supply ways have come in to picture. Subsequently new problems have been emerging which are costing the nature. There are certainly many reasons behind this.
Firstly, tons of plastic, oils, and toxic chemicals are included in the manufacturing, distributing, and selling of different goods, which in some or other form becomes part of the air, water, and even soil. In other words, must elements of survival of any being on this earth are being polluted enormously. Secondly, the unnecessary usage of automobiles too is a big concern. Everyday a major amount of environmental degradation is being caused by the smoke evolving from these.
That being said, the lawmakers and individuals can take responsibility to bring in initiatives that can act as an answer to many of these problems. By avoiding usage of plastic, utilizing public transport, stopping the disposal of toxic waste into water bodies, and using biodegradable products can help to a greater extent.
In essence, while people are enjoying the privilege of availing whatever goods they are wishing for, its’ consequences are costing a fortune to the environment. Therefore it is time for all the people around the world to wake up and act responsibly to avoid further damage to the earth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Subsequently,
...nd supply ways have come in to picture. Subsequently new problems have been emerging which a...
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Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...ge of automobiles too is a big concern. Everyday a major amount of environmental degrada...
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Line 9, column 85, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ivilege of availing whatever goods they are wishing for, its' consequences are costing...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...e costing a fortune to the environment. Therefore it is time for all the people around th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, even so, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28767123288 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02057124211 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640410958904 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6027761982 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8235294118 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13398986921 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380629842233 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376964154086 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695358569768 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402387563446 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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