The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the differences of an island after the installation of tourist infrastructure.
Overall, there were a significant number of facilities have been constructed in the island. However, the natural resources and landscape of the island is still well preserve.
Before the construction, it is clearly that there were only trees, a beach and most parts of the island were empty. As is observe form the map, after the construction, many facilities have been built including a reception, a restaurant and many accommodations for tourists. In addition, a pier was also constructed and the beach is utilize for the swimming purpose. There are two types of track to connect these facilities. First type is the vehicle track which begin at the pier then go circle around the reception and end at restaurant. Besides that, there are various short footpaths which lead to each tourist's house as well as the beach.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'observed'.
Suggestion: observed
...t parts of the island were empty. As is observe form the map, after the construction, m...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'utilized'.
Suggestion: utilized
...r was also constructed and the beach is utilize for the swimming purpose. There are two...
^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'well', 'in addition', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270588235294 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.147058823529 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0647058823529 0.0946595960268 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0529411764706 0.0501214627716 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00588235294118 0.0437548338989 13% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.117647058824 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0352941176471 0.0403226058552 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.97850534892 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0117647058824 0.0326793684256 36% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.147058823529 0.0861772015684 171% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.021408717616 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0117647058824 0.011925033212 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 929.0 1933.35771543 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 152.0 316.048096192 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.11184210526 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 4.20517956788 83% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.322368421053 0.374742101984 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256578947368 0.28420135186 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190789473684 0.203846283523 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.157894736842 0.137316102897 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97850534892 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 176.037074148 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611842105263 0.56093040696 109% => OK
Word variations: 53.8475046991 60.7387585426 89% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0891783567 56% => OK
Sentence length: 16.8888888889 20.7743622355 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8628863217 49.517814964 52% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.222222222 127.492653851 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7743622355 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 0.814263465372 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38877755511 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 42.5467836257 49.1944974215 86% => OK
Elegance: 2.05714285714 1.69124875643 122% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477794024783 0.332605444948 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110659752855 0.102741220458 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0571718334791 0.0668466124924 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.599611769457 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.195021415122 0.148594505496 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.236789856339 0.134430193775 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112285492296 0.0742795772207 151% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.395311038535 0.324371583561 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0349771736219 0.0638462369009 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.386228065407 0.228012699653 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476392015413 0.058150111329 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 0.0 5.90881763527 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 2.0 10.4468937876 19% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.