University students always focus on one specialist subject, but some people think universities should encourage their students to study a range of subjects in addition to their own subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are different views in the society, about how much choice learners should have with regards to what they study in university. Whilst, some argue that universities should promote other subjects in addition to the specialist subject among the teenagers. I believe that students should be able to study other course along with the specific subjects of their choice.
Educational institutes should promote other subjects like arts, sports, physical education etc. Moreover, learning these subjects will ease study related stress from students which would eventually help them to succeed. Infact, some adolescence deserts the studies midway and choose easier option as they were unable to handle the stress. For example, a study conducted by federal department of education, UK in 2011 stated that approximately 10% of students drops out from university due to stress. In other words, by enriching youth with other subjects along with their specialist stream will create options for them instead of failed career. when students learns various subjects they would be able to understand the needs of society, resulting in growth of the economy. For instance, one of my friend john is qualified computer engineer but he chooses farming as his profession due to scarcity of food in nation and excellent business opportunity.
On the other hand, Learners who focus on specific stream, they would all look for employment in that specific industry and it would affect demand and supply ratio. there would be fewer jobs compared to number of job seeker.For example, in India most students prefer to study computer engineering and as a result, software engineers are a dime a dozen in the country. many of them are struggling to find a decent employment because the supply has exceeded the demand. Worse still, a crisis in the IT industry affects all of them and the economy of the nation.
To conclude, Learners should be encourage to study other subjects to avoid stress and as a optional career to meet up the demand in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15407854985 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59001384232 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567975830816 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3676728703 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.733333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280262498345 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976268618848 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887269853078 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184952149734 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113148930914 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.