Unversity students should pay in full, for their own education instead of the society funding their study. The reason is that individuals tend to benefit after graduation more than the society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?! And give your own op

Essay topics: Unversity students should pay in full, for their own education instead of the society funding their study. The reason is that individuals tend to benefit after graduation more than the society.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?!

And give your own opinion.

Hussein1987's picture

At the beginning, if we need to talk the advantages, it will amlost benefit both sides sides society and individuals alike, because those twc parts depend on each. We can not seperate one from the other. Notable that individuals are important in the society, so human will contribute to develop their country, so it should be counted as benefits for their community. As a result i disagree that the students have to pay the complete amount from the the start until graduation.

On the one hand, Government paly a basic role by encouraging people to continue their education in the universities in different fields, such medicine, and architecture. The government shall take step to save a specific amonut of money to support the students for studying. Or providing a scholarships for intelligent students in certain subjects which they are specialized in. For example there is a student his name is Jack Tomerson graduated from the fculty medicin in Stanford University, he has created a medicine during his studying in the university to heal patients from the disease of tuberculosis in his society Furthermore, is not this invention counted as a benefits? On this way that the government should think about those kind of people and help them financialy, they must pay attention and giving them the full careness.

To sum up, It is not deniable that both should have a mutual benefits and advantages.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: sides
...advantages, it will amlost benefit both sides sides society and individuals alike, because ...
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...ounted as benefits for their community. As a result i disagree that the students h...
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...nefits for their community. As a result i disagree that the students have to pay ...
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Suggestion: the
...ts have to pay the complete amount from the the start until graduation. On the one ...
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...ts have to pay the complete amount from the the start until graduation. On the one ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a scholarship' or simply 'scholarships'?
Suggestion: a scholarship; scholarships
...the students for studying. Or providing a scholarships for intelligent students in certain sub...
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Suggestion: a benefit; benefits
...rmore, is not this invention counted as a benefits? On this way that the government should...
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...s. To sum up, It is not deniable that both should have a mutual benefits and a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, for example, kind of, as a result, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01709401709 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88670073404 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.961854813 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.4 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203997699569 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686365752149 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434013471441 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120900831778 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046171680236 0.056905535591 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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