Violence in society increases when more violence is shown on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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It is believed that there is increased violence in the society when television programmes contain high volumes of violence. i completely agree with this view because we are very likely to behave like what we see very often. This essay will discuss reasons for my view in more detail.
To begin with, the television influences our lives these days because we spend majority of our time watching it. When there is an increased broadcast of graphic and chaotic nature it robs off on viewers. For example, many serial killers confessed they got insights for their crimes from video games which taught them gun use and modern warfare. Therefore, people are more likely to take to crime and voilence from constantly seeing it on the television.
Another reason the television encourages violence is the justification of wars and conflicts to solve world conflicts. it is now common to see videos of war exploits, starving and killing of enemy forces on the televsion which encourages some viewers to apply these violent means to solve issues at work, school or homes. For example, the coverage of islamic terrorist attacks has led to increase in islamophobia in the western world that have led to attack on innocent muslims. In essence, coverage of war activities have resulted in reprisal attacks people from enemy countries.
In conclusion, the amount of violent content on the television influences people negatively to take to violence. There is need to reduce violence shown on air to discourage people from exhibiting violent tendencies
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1581027668 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67422779903 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604743083004 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5317565634 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.384615385 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162610087613 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558900654631 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619774469573 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094899512067 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537052598603 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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