We often hear that new technology presents a threat to our traditions. In what ways, however, can new technology help maintain our traditions.
We often hear that new technology presents a threat to our traditions. In what ways, however, can new technology help maintain our traditions?
It is argued that because of technology many traditions are in danger; however, technology can be utilized to teach mother-tongue as well as cultural values to the upcoming generations.
Technology can help children to learn mother-tongue more effectively. Since they are more attracted towards technical gadgets than traditional methods of learning, it will become easy for them to grasp and become fluent in their mother-tongue by using them. Different games can be developed to teach them language in effective manner whereas cartoon movies can be created so they can learn different aspects of the language. For instance, a company named vismaad in India has developed many software, which are loved by children and proved to be more effective than traditional ways of teaching. Hence, people should look alternatives like games and other software in order to make their children fluent in mother-tongue.
The latest technology like Virtual reality, a technology that helps to experience the things like they are happening, can also be utilized so our upcoming generations can feel how their forefathers used to live and can learn more about their culture. For instance, Utilizing Virtual reality the government of china has developed a museum for generations to experience their culture. In the absence of technology, it would never been possible for the individuals to experience as well as learn about their culture.
In conclusion, although it is believed that technological advancement is threating cultural values, it can be utilized by upcoming generations to experience culture and their mother's language.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...ny named vismaad in India has developed many software, which are loved by children a...
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Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun software seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much software', 'a good deal of software'.
Suggestion: much software; a good deal of software
...ny named vismaad in India has developed many software, which are loved by children and proved...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4598540146 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04142287045 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507299270073 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2824403775 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30776446801 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165422327449 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.241014205454 0.0667982634062 361% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270111014342 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.338088934 0.056905535591 594% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.