When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration for many. Others, however, prefer different other aspects of a job over the salary they earn.
In your opinion what are the most important aspects of a job?
It is clear that money plays an important part in every individuals life. Although some people believe that salary plays a significant role in choosing a job, I feel that it is necessary to check for the other aspects as well.
Firstly, There is no doubt that salary plays a vital role when selecting the career. This is because one needs it for daily expenditure as well as savings for the future. For instance, Work without proper wage may lead to carelessness which in turns reduces the quality and productivity. Moreover, It may create financial troubles and make the individual depressed. Conversely, If the person is offered with competent salary, it will help him to pursue his goals and interests which benefits all the parties involved.
That said, Passion for work is another important aspect that people will seek for while choosing their careers. The reason for this is that it drives the person to perform with enthusiasm and provides the zeal to involve more in proceedings of the job. To illustrate, If an individual likes teaching, he can explain with more interest and nurture the child's future. Besides, Job satisfaction also plays a major role in one's professional life. If one is not satisfied with the work, it will have a negative effect on the Employer and the other peers working with him.
In conclusion, Although it is essential for people to prioritize the wages for their necessities, In my view, it is definitely necessary to consider the aspects of the passion and job satisfaction for better career. Because, it gives personal satisfaction and happiness in a person's life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... money plays an important part in every individuals life. Although some people believe that...
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ersonal satisfaction and happiness in a persons life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, conversely, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9962962963 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75254963488 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559259259259 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4436435995 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3571428571 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201753723774 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668497469228 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694343467594 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13552891039 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586101642657 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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