Each year, the crime rate increases.
What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples.
There is no doubt that the rise in criminal activities is unquestionably one of the most prevailing and worrying aspects in both the developed and developing world's. This essay will explore the causes for the increase in crime and propose some measures which might mitigate them.
One major concern for the surge of criminality in modern societies is directly proportional to the rise in poverty. The main reason for this is twofold, firstly, the lack of necessities such as food, shelter, and clothing forcing the individual to indulge in the theft. Secondly, insufficient earnings may also drive the person to commit atrocities against the elite class or the government. To illustrate, a recent study of crime statistics showed that countries with lower Human development index have 40 % more crime rate than the developed nations. To combat this problem, authorities should find out the ways to increase the standard of living by addressing the basic needs which result in the reduction of monetary crimes that constitute a majority chunk.
Another significant cause of the upsurge in crimes is the role of the internet and cinema. This is because the advent of sophisticated latest technology has led to the rise in tech-based crimes as learning few software tools and attaining technical expertise can hack and steal the confidential data instantly within a fraction of seconds. Furthermore, the movies are also focusing more on stories related to robbery and violence which has a detrimental impact on teenagers and children. For instance, A survey on internet crimes by a group of Cambridge professors confessed that the US and UK have faced more data-stealing crimes in the last few years due to inconsistent gaps in combating the security breach. This issue can be tackled by hiring ethical hackers in every sector and improving the security measures by installing and administering the anti-hacking software effectively and efficiently which might control these violations.
In conclusion, two of the main causes which resulted in up-rise of criminal offenses are poverty and the internet. However, these issues can be minimized if the government focuses on providing proper basic facilities and also tackling the web-based crimes by proper security measures.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34444444444 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92980782853 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591666666667 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5010741017 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.428571429 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227083731824 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735774061026 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384288569065 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13675719691 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186957553689 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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