When a person spends most of his or her time working a job with little job satisfaction, their life loses meaning.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion that spending the whole day long 6 days a week at work, which does not bring us any satisfaction, affects our purpose of life. I somehow agree with this opinion because work occupies a significant amount of time and if somebody feels unhappy during it, almost their whole life is spent in misery.
First, it is true that the most enjoyable moments of our lives are spent with our friends and families. However, our occupation and time spent at work plays a great part in our well-being and sense of fulfillment from life. For instance, if a person works at a daunting and unaspiring job at the end of the day they will feel completely drained and they will not have enough energy for an active life apart from their job. Thus, it is hugely important that work is rewarding and brings a sense of satisfaction.
Nevertheless, the sense of meaningful life depends on a person’s outlook on life. Some people approach life as a positive experience, while others as a negative one. That is why those who have a positive outlook on life always have goals and plans for a future even if work does not give satisfaction to them. In contrast, pessimistic people even having a rewarding job can feel frustration and emptiness of life. For instance, one of my friends always complained about her job and lack of purpose in life but after a course with a psychologist, she realized that she has a well-paid job that makes it possible to purchase whatever she wants and travel and she is satisfied now.
In conclusion, I agree that work is very important for our sense of fulfillment in our lives. However, it is not one only factor because a person's state of mind contributes to it as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tate of mind contributes to it as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63486842105 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67292964578 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532894736842 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9668761137 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.384615385 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241373100664 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813724441405 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386410816083 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137201299582 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413591027336 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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