When a person spends most of his or her time working a job with little job satisfaction, their life loses meaning.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The culture of working round the clock with lesser gratification has led to meaningless life in this contemporary epoch. This essay firmly concurs this fact because of two main reasons. Firstly, it will look upon that how unhappy job results in miserable life and secondly, when an individual does not enjoy with loved ones, the life has no meaning.
To embark on the prominent reason, it is a well-known fact that a person spends his/her majority of the day at work and if that environment is daunting, eventually, pessimistic attitude will emerge. This will result in tension and worries of work only, by ignoring one’s peace of mind. For example, an article was published by WHO stating that psychologist are concerned of the fact that the sleeping disorders have proliferated immensely among population since the work pressure is quite high. Therefore, uninspiring jobs drain out a person that he forget to rest in his life.
Besides this, the workaholics are seen to be so occupied mentally with the burden of their work that they are unable to enjoy some quality time with friends or family. Even, getting annoyed over small things becomes their habit that results in quarrels or conflicts, ultimately, weakening bonds. This can be exemplified from the surge in divorce rates as the work pressure reaches the house that has rooted disputes in couples. Thus, dissatisfied work ruins the personal front of a person.
To reiterate, it can be said that although earning to run livelihood is a necessity, the life should be put on stake as dissatisfaction of work can, not only, deteriorate one’s mental peace but can also isolate him/her from the closed ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86330935252 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63828752178 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622302158273 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 278.0 20.2975951904 1370% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1352.0 106.682146367 1267% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 278.0 20.7667163134 1339% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 102.0 7.06120827912 1445% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208475271898 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208475271898 0.084324248473 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115123159271 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479655801964 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 140.5 13.0946893788 1073% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -210.69 50.2224549098 -420% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 111.7 11.3001002004 988% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.39 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.08 8.58950901804 257% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 113.2 10.1190380762 1119% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.7795591182 547% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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