Due to so many young people dropping out from schools, the rate of unemployment is increasing and it affects our society in different ways.
In your opinion, how can this situation be improved?
The rate of unemployment has been increasing and the major factor responsible for it is considered to be young students dropping out of the schools. This essay will shed light upon some radical measures that can assist in curbing this situation. Firstly, it will discuss the notion of financial crisis they prevail and secondly the level of awareness among their parents.
One of the solutions to improve this situation can be if the school education gets either free or provided with more scholarship schemes so that children belonging to every section of society can easily afford it, as paying tuition fee for schools is still a challenging situation for many families. Taking example of Canada, where government sponsors education of school children which leaves no reason for them to opt out.
Another important step in this direction can be the awareness programmes for the parents. Efforts should be made by NGOs and government in making adults understand the value of education so that they can motivate their wards to attend schools. Some of such schemes are already working in nations like India where government is working their fingers to the bone to make education possible for every child.
To conclude, it can be said that the problem of youngsters leaving the school at early age has adverse effect on the individual as well as society but the suggested remedies such as improving scholarship schemes and awareness programmes for their families can definitely make a big difference in the life of the child.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06746031746 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64626014287 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.5705627658 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.888888889 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249224339766 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990276773036 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777003533504 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147181480385 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446413160605 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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