The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?
In this fast-paced world, cooking is considered a trivial task owing to which there has been a boom in the demand of packaged food. Although this kind of food has made the life of workaholics easy, its repercussions on health and the high cost incurred if bought regularly cannot be neglected due to which I firmly argue that its downsides outnumber the benefits.
To commence on the principle merit of consuming packed food, 21st century is of people who work for prolonged hours due to which they are left with no time to cook food. As a result, buying canned meals from supermarkets which can be prepared in just blink of an eye, is found to be most convenient method. The best example of this is Americans who highly rely on these meals as they prioritize their career over such a tedious task of preparing meals. Thus, these food items have become need of some.
Despite providing convenience, canned food is putting human health at stake. To elaborate, these meals are injected with preservatives in order to prevent it from being spoiled. The preservatives used are some sort of chemicals which can have deleterious impact on our body, making them prone multifarious diseases. To illustrate this fact, a research was published by WHO which clearly stated that there is no impact of antibiotics on humans due to development of chemical-resistance. Therefore, the day is not far when not even a single human being will be healthy.
Apart from this, another concern relates with the money as frozen meals cost hefty to the consumer if in taken regularly. In other words, these meals have the cost of packaging too which rises the actual price of meal. While, if the same kind of meal is prepared at home, the cost found would be comparatively less, thereby saving a huge money. In this regard, an article was published by a blogger and a chef by profession named Mr. Sanjeev Kapoor who stated that 60% of a person’s earning will be used for food if canned products gained popularity, hence, these foods are a pinch on the pocket.
To reiterate, it can be said that undoubtedly, working class is helpless as they are so occupied in their work that they are left with no other choice but detrimental impact on health along with being so expensive food cannot be kept aside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, kind of, sort of, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75314861461 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68713684084 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55919395466 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7867848214 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.9375 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8125 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0928550718294 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0327543832567 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288832138688 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569326960164 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191388887482 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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