While studying some students take weekend or evening jobs to help with expenditure. How do you feel about this? What are the drawbacks and benefits of such a decision?
Pupils in many countries opt for part-time work to support their day to day expenses. In my opinion, it is always beneficial to be self-dependent and not to rely on guardians for monetary support. However, a moral support is always required from family.
There are several merits of working few hours a days. One can lead life on their own terms and decide career path without anyone’s permission. In addition, it also helps them to grow as a mature adult who is responsible and self-reliant. For instance, teenagers in western countries start working at a tender age to fund their education. This helps them to learn basic fundamentals of life as well as they can stand tall on their own feet in the society.
On the other hand, with pros comes cons. Since, such kind of students get involved in earning their living. There are times when they become isolated from the world and are completely engrossed in their lifestyle. Sometimes, this may lead to depression and anxiety as well. Due to lack of support and interaction with friends and family members. To certain extent, there are times they have an issue to cop up with studies due to work pressure. For example, youth in few countries separate from their respective family and commence own life at a young age of 13 to 14 years. This might not only hamper their development of family values also it can create a feeling of detachment from blood relatives.
In conclusion, a balance needs to be maintained between work and studies. Channelizing priorities and focusing on them is more important. This not only will help an individual to grow in his/her career but also they can excel in their studies with flying colours.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...are several merits of working few hours a days. One can lead life on their own terms a...
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Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'fundamentals'.
Suggestion: fundamentals
...eir education. This helps them to learn basic fundamentals of life as well as they can stand tall ...
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Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n the other hand, with pros comes cons. Since, such kind of students get involved in ...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...kind of students get involved in earning their living. There are times when they ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84137931034 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69071597118 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572413793103 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4681902848 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.8947368421 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0891364537695 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276729830168 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328735577878 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0537114361649 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375187218096 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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