The widespread use of internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems? What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, technology has dominated almost all aspects of human’s lives and it is very apparent in people’s daily life. Internet is one of the recent products of technology that changes modern life in different ways. It is believed that internet caused many problems such as online crimes and lack of physical activities in the society.
It is true that internet brings a large number of benefits for the residents of the globe, but it has some side effects as well. The most important problem that is caused by internet is online crime which is dramatically on the increase. Although these crimes such as embezzlement, fraud and the like are known as victimless crimes, they have detrimental effects on the society. The other significant drawback is the scarcity of physical activities among people of different age groups. Adults usually try to do their shopping online or paying the bills via internet, while children spent most of their leisure time surfing the net or playing online games.
These issues should not be neglected and the government authorities and families must tackle the problems. Cyber police seems to be a fair solution for online crimes; however, government can introduce new laws and impose fines in order to eradicate this difficulty. Moreover, families should spend more time with each other and try to occupy children’s free time with outdoor activities such as cycling, jugging and swimming.
To sum up, although internet facilitates individuals’ lives in various ways, it caused some hardship for people. Introducing new laws and enticing families to spend more time on outdoor activities and respecting family values are the best solutions for these probems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ety. It is true that internet brings a large number of benefits for the residents of the globe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30402930403 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83590301887 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593406593407 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.4992131305 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.384615385 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0886538893495 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333366640711 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303890578911 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0531956050386 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134554913855 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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