Along with the development of technology, the Internet is also increasingly used all over the world. In addition to the benefits which Internet usage may bring to, there are also numerous drawbacks from it. This essay will discuss some problem caused by using the Internet and put forward to provide several measures to solve them.
First and foremost, over-using Internet leads to the lack of interaction between people. For instance, it is not hard to catch the scene of people who are stick with their mobile phones in restaurants rather than talking with each other. As a result, family members do not have enough communicate as in the past.
Another problem involves individuals’ development, it is proved in numerous researches over time about the addiction of internet causing for its users, especially young people. Once they stick in Internet, they do not have time for other activities such as studying, exercising, leisure, etc. Consequently, individuals cannot develop comprehensively.
Tackling this issue involves raising the public’s awareness. Firstly, mass media coverage can be utilized to awake Internet user from over-using it. Secondly, the government can spend money to construct public facilities and encourage citizen to do more exercising, to have face-to-face interaction with one another. Same as those for children, the school should frequently hold outdoor activities and events which require children to communicate and work as a team with others. By doing these suggestions, the problem caused by Internet usage can be minimized.
To sum up, the widespread use of Internet results in many issues for individuals, but it also can be solved by using some measures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...s not hard to catch the scene of people who are stick with their mobile phones in resta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40449438202 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9893881995 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3874607619 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170928587218 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060487639413 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542274313219 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105070123622 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447476388574 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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