The widespread use of internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems? What solutions can you suggest?

In the last few years the usage of internet has rapidly increased and because of this people are encountering many problems in day to day life. The main problems include reduce of productivity, not mingling with people around them and last but not the least physical health related issues.

Firstly, people who use internet most of the time tend to waste a lot of time which is actually reducing the productivity of the person. Secondly, they don't socialize with the people around them because of which they are not even aware of the persons living in his community or the apartment. If we don't have a communication with the persons near by we would face severe problems in case of emergency and in need. Finally, those who are addicted to internet are spending a lot of time on computers or smarter phones for hours with no physical activity which is leading to lot of severe health problems.

As a solution to the problems described above, people should be aware of the fact how much time they are spending on internet and does it really necessary to use internet for such a long time for the things they are working upon. There should be awareness created among the people particularly among youth and children regarding the problems which they will be facing in future due to the addiction to internet. Thus they need to be cautious in using the internet. I think people should dedicate only certain amount of time on internet and make use of the valuable time to interact with others rather than spending time on internet.

In conclusion the I would say that usage of internet is changing the lifestyle of the people. However it is up to us to make use of the technology and internet in a better way which in turn helps us to be a better person.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, i think, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62300319489 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50750081769 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485623003195 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.9418808074 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.583333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137035564429 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577327144056 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282708920507 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845676696722 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268521869184 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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