Will new train freight transport system, what is the benefit for the country?
Designing a new freight train through out India is an extremely intricate process. This huge initiative will benefit India’s economy in leaps and bounds. Additionally, it will reduce the air pollution caused by the road transport and improve the goods getting transferred on time. In the following passage, I will explain the benefits the nation will ripe because of this new transport system which will be explained along with examples.
Does the road transport is the major cause for the increase of domestic product? Yes. To import or export a product between states many firms incur hue transport cost, this can be minimized by the proposed freight service. For instance, the recent survey shows that the cost of a car to get exported from Delhi to Chennai will be reduced to one third due with new freight system. Moreover, it also helps the on time delivery of goods tremendously. Many time it is witnessed in news channels that due to bad weather trucks and Lorries got struck in huge traffic pileups, such situations can be avoided. Therefore, the upcoming new freight system will help to reduce the price of a product as well as aid efficient delivery of goods.
Furthermore, the project will create avenue of job opportunities all over India, which suffice the needs of many youngsters. When the goods are transported using commercial vehicles will cause air pollution, this can be reduced by using the new train freight system and the earth will be benefited in many ways. The emission of carbon monoxide from diesel vehicles will be decrease drastically, which help to create environment friendly transport system. For example, in Germany, most of the domestic products are transported through freight train service to improve the air quality. Thus, it is believed, the new reform will create new employment openings also it will help to preserve our planet from environmental hazards.
To sum up, as the proverb says, “better late than never”, the proposed new freight system will foster a new transport trend. People will be benefitted with reduced domestic price and nation will grow financially by create more job opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, moreover, so, therefore, third, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13314447592 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73301668881 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532577903683 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5837985711 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.588235294 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431570746492 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146831632823 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087084282654 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302291503241 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538797293131 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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