Most of the companies use many strategies to increase their sales which are those and according to your which method is effective.

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Most of the companies use many strategies to increase their sales which are those and according to your which method is effective.

Nowadays, companies use various strategies to increase their sales. The most common ways such as clearance sale, lucky draw, earning reward points and SMS alert to subscribed customers. In the following passage, the above methods will be briefly explained before declaring my best choice.
Many chain retail stores like Big bazar and Reliance trends stores offer huge discount sale, which provoke many youngsters to buy the garments of their wish. In addition, the buy1 and get3 offers are the most common way to target some people who wish to buy more clothes within their budget. Do the customers really benefitted by these types of sales? No. The ultimate intention of these huge offers to clear out stores outdates clothes, and to increase their sales. Therefore, the aforementioned the ways are being use by some retail store to spike profit as well as to meet the target sales.
Furthermore, organization conduct festival season sale and arrange luck draw contest, this will ensure more people to buy clothes beyond their budget to meet the minimum criteria, in order to participate in the contest. For instance, Shoppers stops store has reward point system, which attract many people to buy regular commodities in their chain of stores, such initiatives have witnessed to goods sales numbers, and customers can also redeem their reward points. Moreover, SMS alert is the new trend which is being followed by new stores, this method will inform the new commodities in the store, even this can method can increase business too. Hence, it is believed above measures proved to be very effective by some famous companies.
To sum up, the very famous Dubai shopping festival proves that by conducting lucky draw contest has witnessed huge sales figures, also some survey proved this is the effective method and my choice too.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, furthermore, hence, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10666666667 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42079876625 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563333333333 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6325646409 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.846153846 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248917821667 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870066327261 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726590071688 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143875471504 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566648458335 0.056905535591 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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