Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
At present, many advertisements enable people to buy products which are do not require, while others assume that advertisements create awareness of the new products which will improve our life style. In my opinion, I agree that promotions will encourage people to know new products as well as to educate them on the latest offers available in the market.
Firstly, a good reason to encourage advertisement is that it will create awareness among people about the new products are launching in the market. For instance, last week a new promotion on the introduction of vegetable cutter helped many working women the new product which had saved the precious time of working women who have bought the product. If such promotion was not telecasted then many people will not aware of the products, which at the moment ease the life style of many working women.
Secondly, advertisements will aid people to know the latest offers. Market is so competitive hence such promotions aware the public on the latest deals offered by various online and offline dealers. This will educate people on the best deals available in the market, so that they can save the money wisely. For example, my friend was planning to buy a mobile phone; the recent offers from Amazon helped him to save 3000 Rupees. Therefore, advertisements enable people to save some money based on the various offers on various products.
Finally, advertisements are becoming necessity to create awareness among people about the new products launching in the market, some times few items could ease the life style to a great extent. In addition, some promotions will help many people to save some money due to competitive pricing between various sellers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05653710247 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65825858377 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494699646643 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6932683909 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9166666667 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210737986977 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915800265865 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074941408402 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153321391562 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702087237433 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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