Women and men are commonty seen as having different strengths and
weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions
because of their gender?
Physically and mentally, women and men have some obvious differences from each other. there is a hot debate between some people who think both genders can work in every job freely, some others proclaim that there have to be some limitation for choosing a job. I agree with the latter statement with some definite reason supported this idea.
Firstly, based on the researches and recent experiments, boys and girls have a different attitudes in job preference. for example boys have more tendency to military jobs rather than girls. Although women are allowed to work in the army in most countries, there are some regulations in some other countries based on these researches that put restrictions for hiring women in this particular job. Besides, most women are not interested in particular jobs as men often do and vice versa. Take babysitting for example and think whether is suitable for men to do or not.
Moving to the second point, according to sociologists researches, working in certain professions can cause serious harm to women and may push them into an insecure atmosphere which may lead to being abused. For example, labor jobs can bring lots of troubles for women. This condescending behavior can evolve regret and remorse for women. Moreover, nobody has a clue for solving these troubles;Therefore, there has to be a reconsideration whole around this vital issue.
To sum up, without any discrimination attitude, there are pretty obvious differences between both gender that should be considered in job choice. Therefore there have to be some restrictions in finding a job for genders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, in particular, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12547528517 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76995088609 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596958174905 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8259191809 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134410010029 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524863906849 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510242466781 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858355950701 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175225147448 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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