The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing problems not only for the poor in undeveloped countries but also for industrialized developing nations. Describe some of the problems and suggest at least one solution?
Increasing population is always a matter of concern for many nations. In the past few decades, the population is increasing at an alarming rate. It is becoming a problem for the under-developed countries as well as the developed ones. The following essay will discuss the effects of the overpopulation and give a viable solution to overcome this issue.
there are mainly two problems associated with the increase in the population. Firstly, unemployment rate would increase if there is huge population in the country. The government would fail to provide job opportunities to the people which result in increased crime rate, as both are directly proportional to each other. Moreover, the government would not be able to provide or fulfill the basic necessities of their citizens. even though, huge mass of population is paying taxes, with this rise in the populace there would be very less portion of the taxable income reaching to their people. leading to limited access to the basic amenities like food, clothing and shelter. For providing these facilities to the people, there should be equal distribution of all the amenities which could be impossible. Thereby, the drawbacks of the overpopulated countries are way ahead.
Although, there are many problems with the increasing population but if planned properly would lead to a better world. one solution which the government of the respective nation could take is to impose strict laws on the individuals to control their families. The best example is china. china was the most populated country in the world in 2011, but by imposing ‘one child in each family’ law they have control their ratio of population. Thus, introduction of such laws would be greatly beneficial to the world as a whole. Another solution which could be feasible is by creating awareness of the birth control pills among the people. By using, this pills birth rate could be gradually controlled. even the government can take a step forward and distribute this pill to the poor and underprivileged members of the society. Therefore, these two solutions would greatly help to control the growing population.
To sum up, as there are problems like rise in unemployed people or low provision of the basic necessities connected to the rise in the overall population of the world. Tus, to readdress the imbalance created by this the government should take serious steps by supplying the birth control pill or impose strict laws making a world a better place to live-in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2098.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12958435208 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87559875757 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501222493888 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0678064228 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2173913043 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7826086957 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.60869565217 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201862031825 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613317763206 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593037943036 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138131762394 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740963489236 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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