Write about the following topic.
The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
Nowadays the internet has greatly increased our access to information. But, not only has changed the way we get informed but the way we communicate with each other. With the level of globalization, society has reached. Almost everything is one click away, thousands of books, papers, journals, magazines are online.
The traditional press is evolving into a more digital and easier way to inform. This has a big potential of reaching thousands of people around the world as long as you have internet access. But, not only the press has been favored by the internet. Students are now able to get online programs from universities worldwide. Not long ago this was only possible if you go to the city where the university was located, Perhaps, many online programs have a face to face component that students should fulfill.
Companies, workers, entrepreneurs, and customers for every one of the internet have had a big impact on how to do things. On one hand, entrepreneurs now can easily promote their products or service at a low cost. They can reach many more people than they used to. Focusing on the target market without a big investment. On the other hand, for companies and their workers, the internet is the principal tool in their daily basis operations. 1- Internal and external communication is through emails and websites. 2- Recruitment for big companies is almost 50% online. 3- Some companies hire their customer services in a different country. 4- Some people work for a company abroad without moving to the company country.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99224806202 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77838584775 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600775193798 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8699130533 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5555555556 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127369690062 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400822789982 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738388293702 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897839564589 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430881452954 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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