Write about the following topic:
In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Today adolescents have limited interest in reading news in newspapers as well as in news programs. However,there are many causitive factors which are responsible for this.In the following paragraphs, I will explain the causes of this behaviour of pupils and also its solutions.
To commence with, technology and the academic burden are the two major contributors that are responsible for distracting the children from getting news. On the one hand, video games and mobile phones
primarly participate in the diversion of the curiosity of youngsters towards curret affairs , due to the fact, children spend majority of their time in watching cartoons and playing games. For example, a survey showed that majority of the social applications such as Tick-tock has negative effect on pupils. On the other hand, the multiple subjects in school curriculum do not allow students to give attention to other things, which ultimately deteriorates their coginitive development.
However, there are certain corrective measures that can be utilized to tackle this situation.Firstly, parents should put some restriction on their wards for using electronic gadgets, other than that, they can schedule a particular time that young ones can utilize to read newspapers, which would further help in their holistic development. Moreover, educational institutes should persuade newspaper reading in schools and they should evaluate students current knowledge related to news.
To conclude, it is clear that youngsters are loosing interest in news and current affairs because of the major impact of technology in their lives as well as increased syllabus in schools. Nevertheless, there are certain solutions like proper supervision by parents, teachers which can alter this situation and would be beneficial for the children .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for example, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59854014599 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98715129912 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624087591241 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0108452491 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.4 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153907974193 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587184582444 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382740851171 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836488733233 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047321757822 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.