WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words
The role of Television programs and newspapers is crucial in our society. While these means of advertisment should be beneficial to the audience, Their effect on nations is still a controversial issue. What I mean is that the negative effect of sharing the bad news, drawbacks and obstacles is masking the advantages. In my view, Television presenters and journalists should focus on the achievements that occured in our country. In this essay I will discuss the reasons of adopting that opinion.
Generally speaking, crimes has greatly increased the last few years in many cities. Talk shows allocate most of its time for discussing the remarkable increase of criminal Records, because that’s an Interesting topic for audience. However, such news can affect our lives and lead to unsecurity feelings. For instance, A widely spread accident was that a university student killed her fiancé and sole his money has caused a significant decrease in number of students at the university on the following day as they feeled unsafe.
No doubt that The quality of health care services declined in most of the health care centers. However, confirming this issue through writing about the medical accidents in one of the national newspapers is certainly a disaster and can lead to many ramifications. For Example, the doctor who forgot one of the medical utensils inside his patient’s stomach, as published in one of the famous newspapers, has led to refusal of many patients to undergo their determined surgeries. Therefore it is unacceptable to keep importing those accidents to public.
In conclusion, Government should regulate Media work by setting rules to prevent reporting those news. In addition to highlighting the progress that achieved in our community.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 484, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... to undergo their determined surgeries. Therefore it is unacceptable to keep importing th...
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Line 13, column 92, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
...k by setting rules to prevent reporting those news. In addition to highlighting the progre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35231316726 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98415075185 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637010676157 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3173926193 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.266666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0696915891356 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225638691307 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282103564164 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0441205610189 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305005563078 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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