In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building.
Do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays many countries issue laws to prevent smoking in public places. However, there are many opponents to this laws as smokers would have to leave the area where smoking is not allowed in order to smoke. I reckon that applying these rules that encourage smoking prevention would positively affect our youngster’s health. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages of these rules.
Scientific studies show that most of the smokers are youngsters. As a result, young people would be a load on the society in the future instead of participating in enriching our community. One of the most effective ways to stop someone from doing bad habbits is to make him feel rejected by the society. The new measures have taken by our government are supporting the previously mentioned point. For instance, when the smokers visit any of the shopping malls and find a signage everywhere that is not allowing smoking, they would feel as they are not accepted in the place. Also, they would start thinking seriously to quit smoking.
It is agreed that smoking could cause serious health hazards. Smokers are more likely to suffer hypertension, diabetes, heart diseases and cancer, amongst others. Although the health complications are mentioned on most of the cigarette boxes, some person read it and continue to smoke without feeling guilty. The only way that could make the feel guilty is money. For instance, when smokers have to pay 1000 dirhams as a fine for smoking in public areas, they will think again about changing their attitude. Thanks to the new laws, Number of smokers has greatly declined.
In conclusion, smoking is a bad habbit and has serious ramifications on the society. For that reason, I support any law that regulate smoking in public places.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...s. However, there are many opponents to this laws as smokers would have to leave the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06484641638 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63216280872 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57337883959 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0666392825 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4444444444 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2777777778 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16828512482 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549116579349 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630627119232 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114455247005 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583473091271 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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